What have you have come to understand as Christian Community and the benefits of a Christian Community?

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Please edit and make revisions on my essay. Please keeping the following expectations in mind:
1. Please try to keep the existing quotes (they are important to the essay) BUT please edit, delete if you feel they do not flow with the essay. Perhaps you can adjust them so they can have a smooth transition.
2. Are the ideas in the essay clearly ordered? Is there any part of the essay that could be left out to good effect? (If so, could a revised organization "save" that part?)
3. Is it Logical? does it make sense?
4. Are the paragraphs adequately developed and is there a clear transition from one idea to the next?
5. Is the Introduction clear? and does it flow nicely to the next paragraph?
6. I believe that the conclusion of my essay needs some much needed clarity to tie into the rest of the essay – Please edit & revise
6. Please edit & revise all Grammatical Issues
7. 12 point, double-spaced, 1? margins 4 pages
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