Personal Statement for Pilot Program

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I would like the Personal Statement to be Proofread and be corrected to look more professional. Change some words that might be repeated few times, etc. The format has to stay the way i uploaded it, it cannot be any more pages, or lines, maximum is 1 page and i have to leave 4 line spaces at the end with letter of size 10.
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