I need someone to fix the work I have done. my teacher gave me a bad grade. I am attaching here her instrouctions. I have already did Part 1, so please make sure to follow the rest of the parts by part 1!
These are her corrections:
Go ahead and erase the story “The Saddest Day in My Life”, as this is not part of this lesson assignment. You will write a story about how Fortunato hurt Montressor’s feelings so bad that Montresor would actually want to kill Fortunato. This assignment is just the beginning of your story. When you write the body paragraphs, you can write about what happened. Open the teacher doc. in lesson 3.04 for an A+ example of a student narration. Hi Shira! Read my explanations below. (You will need to actually write a story, and be sure to include dialogue.) Assessment: Written Assignment You will write the introduction for your narrative essay and add it to the Narrative Organizer. Choose one of the following topics for your Narrative Essay. In the short story, “The Cask of Amontillado,” the reader is never told what the exact insult was that caused Montressor to seek revenge against Fortunato. Write to tell what happened before the story begins in “The Cask of Amontillado.” In the short story, “The Cask of Amontillado,” the reader is never told what becomes of Montressor after he completes his plot against Fortunato. Write to tell what happened after the story ends in “The Cask of Amontillado.”