Draft Memo – Diamonds
This should be a complete, readable draft. I expect a clear research question on the commodity of Diamonds, at least 1000 words responding directly to that question, and a complete bibliography. Everything should be fully referenced. The bibliography should be in full bibliographic format (The MLA format).
IMPORTANT, PLEASE READ IT CAREFULLY:
Writer, I am going to send you a PDF file called ‘Memo Worksheet with instructor comments’. This document includes the comments which were given from my instructor, so that you know how you can fulfill the requirements and the things (e.g. the research question, the article findings, etc.) you need to change and improve from that Memo Worksheet to this Draft Memo.
Also, please make sure that the references or resources you used are including at least 8-9 (out of 15) scholarly sources, such as academic press books, or academic journal articles).
Below are some more comments from my instructor which you may not able to see them from the PDF file (‘Memo Worksheet with instructor comments’) I sent you.
- ‘As written, though, the research question you have currently doesn’t really work in your paper. Almost any industry (automobiles, microprocessors, beer) faces various threats and offers lucrative opportunities.’
‘Overall: This reads like you didn’t have enough time to do a good job. I think you still need to do some basic reading about how the industry works. Please devote some time to this. I know you’re capable of much better work than this.’
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