An executive summary must summarize the entire report. Purpose, question, what was done, findings, the answer and main recommendations, all in less than 1 page. Should be on a separate page. Yours describes the content but does not give the results.
There is no business question in the Introduction. It is in the title but it must also be in the intro. This is the purpose of the report – see the PO and the Handbook (I WILL ATTACH THIS DOCS). You must modify your work so that the introduction clearly states the business question, the data presentation and analysis are related to answering the question, and the conclusion clearly shows the answer.
For table 1, what do the numbers represent?
You present data which supports your arguments, but you only describe the data. It is not interpreted. What can the reader understand from this? What does it mean? How does it help to answer the business question? Try to add some more interpretation of the data you show.
You show three sources of numerical data and one table of information (not numerical). Try to add at least two more sources of numerical data expressed as charts, graphs or tables. (I NEED TO ADD THIS IN THE PAPER, IF IT TAKES MORE PAGES AND I NEED TO PAY FOR THEM PLEASE LET ME KNOW AND FOR THIS I WOULD REQUIRE 2 SOURCES LIKE ONE FOR EACH GRAPH OR TABLE, PREFERABLY USE GRAPHS SINCE I DONT HAVE ANY IN THE PAPER AND OBVIOUSLY WE NEED TO ADD INFORMATION TO THOSE GRAPHS SO I THINK YOU WILL NEED ONE OR TWO PAGES)
The conclusion must include the answer to the business question.
Recommendations should be separated and itemised. (PLEASE SEPARATE DE CONCLUSIONS AND RECOMMENDATIONS AND FIX THEM, PROBABLY YOU WILL TAKE ANOTHER PAGE TO SEPARATE THIS AND WRITE IT PROPERLY)
In text references should not use “et al” unless there are 5 or 6 names; check the APA guidelines.
The biggest problem with your work is the lack of a business question. This really should be the thread that defines and runs through the report. (PLEASE CHECK IT CAREFULLY, ALL THE INFORMATION AND THE CONTENT SHOULD BE ADRESS TO THE QUESTION OF MY PAPER WHICH IS WHAT ARE THE MAIN CHALLENGES WHEN MANAGING A MULTICULTURAL HOSPITALITY TEAM?
PS. tHE GRAPHS IM ASKING FOR I MEAN YOU CAN JUST CREATE THEM WITH SOME INTERESTING DATA YOU GOT FROM SOMEWHERE! PLEASE USE GRAPHS, NOT 3D GRAPHS JUST SIMPLE ONES SINCE I ONLY HAVE TABLES IN MY PAPER
THANK YOU SO SO MUCH FOR YOUR ATTENTION AND PLEASE BE IN CONTACT WITH ME IF YOU NEED SOMETHING, FOR THE DRAFT I GOT A 63 I NEED A HIGHER GRADE TO PASS THIS COURSE, AT LEAST AN 80 OR SOMETHING!
PLEASE SEND ME A MESSAGE IF I HAVE TO PAY FOR EXTRA PAGES, IM SURE I WILL HAVE TO JUST LET ME KNOW PLEASEE! AND DO YOUS BEST! I HAVE TO GET A REALLY GOOD GRADE!