c105 week 7

please help me to edit the paper in the attachment within 24 hours, this paper got low grade, please following the requirement and comment to do big revision including content and grammar. Thank you so much. Please try to reach 600 words.
topic: How wealthy are the 50 wealthiest people in Canada? Who are they? What is their income compared to the national average income? Compare it to the poorest deciles as well. What does this tell you about Canadian society?