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what is a good recommendation for BJB manufacturing company quality management initiative proposal.
-The introduction should be more interesting- start.
– Make the thesis statement much more clear and stronger.
-Please try to restructure the response paper according to the attached outline template.
– Mention at the introduction paragraph that three main argument points related to the articles will be discussed (mention them) and supported by explanation and examples in the body.
– Include much more discussion with the authors’ ideas. Support your own point of view regarding these ideas.
– And also include a counter argument to the thesis statement before the conclusion.
– There are some sentences or paragraphs were not cited. Focus more on citation
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